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You were sitting alone on a bench, sulking. You sighed as you remembered what your classmates had told you.

“Why is your hair like that?” one of them asked.

“What do you mean?” you had asked, confused.

The person just gave you a fake smile and said “Nevermind.”

The next was when a girl asked you about your clothes.

“Why do you dress like that?”

Since you didn’t like that girl, you just rolled your eyes and said: “That’s none of your business.” But inside, you were kinda hurt.

You were already in a pretty bad mood when somebody commented on your handwriting…

The person who borrowed your notes put your notebook down. “I can’t understand your handwriting.”

You were already fuming by this time. “Well I’m sorry,” you started sarcastically. “I didn’t copy those notes just for you to borrow them!”

You buried your face in your hands and groaned. “Oh god why…”

You just sat there with your face in your hands until you heard somebody sit beside you. “Kesesesese~! Is zhe little Frau sleeping?”

You slowly removed your face from your hands and turned to him, a tired smile on your face. “Hi, Gil.”

He had a bright smile on his face. “Kesese~! Hallo, Frau!” He tilted his head (cutely, in your opinion) to the right. “What’s up?”

You sighed and looked above you. “The sky is up.”

Gilbert frowned. You looked so upset. Zhis is unacceptable! he thought. M-meine Frau should never look unhappy! His eyebrows furrowed. “Is something bothering you, (Name)?”

You sighed and looked into his worried crimson eyes. It's rare to see him like this, you thought. “Nah, it's nothing.”

He just raised an eyebrow and stared at you. Oh God, he doesn't believe me, you thought. I might as well tell him... “I'm just feeling a bit down.”

He looked at you closely. I'm gonna freaking kill who ever caused this. “Und?”

You sighed and braced yourself for his reaction. After telling him, there was something in his eyes that you can't identify. Suddenly he stood up, pulling you with him. He had his hands on your shoulders  while leaning down to match your eye level. “Liebling. You're awesome. Don't let anybody tell you otherwise.” Then he kissed your forehead.

He was already walking away when you regained your senses. “OY!” you shouted after him. “Where are you going?!”

“You'll see! Kesesesesese~!”

You didn't have a good feeling about this.

~Das Ende
A/N: This actually sort of happened to me some time ago, and it resulted to this! XD I actually found it lying around unfinished in my folder so I thought, "Why not? XD"

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bkworm5 Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait. What? I'm taking German and, to my understanding, "Frau" either means "Mrs.", "Ms.", "women" or "wife". Also, I believe "Liebling" means "favorite". Taking that into consideration, I find this a lot less credible and enjoyable.
DeamonofSheip Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Frau can mean that, yes, but it also means woman so he's saying "My woman" so its implying that he has feelings. And you're right, Liebling does mean 'favorite" but it also means 'Darling'. 
bkworm5 Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay. Sorry. I'm only in my second year of German so my understanding is not perfect (and I don't trust Google Translate).
DeamonofSheip Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it's a tricky language. i still have trouble sometimes 
IWantSomeMacaroonies Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know these feels! I get bullied a lot and lot, but this story is just SO SWEET! OwOIn Love 
Now you have go go and help every bullied kid Gilbert? Seriously we need you!
everybodydotheflop65 Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awwy Gilly being sweet and callin me awesome =w=
kittykatrocks12 Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw Gil is cute cheering me up like that
Marshalleeslover9 Dec 28, 2013  Student General Artist
PART 2!!!!! PLEASE!!!!
the-awesomest-one Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconitssofluffyplz: :iconitssofluffyplz::iconitssofluffyplz::iconitssofluffyplz:

I've had something similar happen to me. I was always bullied in school ( I'm homeschooled now ) it was never physical but words really hurt.... A lot... Sadly I never had anyone like Gil to pick me up =~=
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